My name is Lucy and I am going to be showing you my narrative writing that me and my class wrote about a mother horse and her ponies. also a tiger.
Date March 1 2021
WALT We are learning to write a narrative using adjectives.
The characters: Mother horse - Ponies - Tiger
The real story
One day, a mother horse took her ponies to the forest to look for berries. Mother horse saw a big Tiger and she ran away from her ponies.
Mother horse started limping, her leg looked sore.
The tiger saw the mother horse but didn’t see the ponies.
The tiger ran after the mother horse.
Mother horse’s leg was not sore so she kicked the tiger and galloped away.
My story
One beautiful sunny day a mother horse was taking her pretty ponies to a wonderful light forest to look for fresh juicy delicious berries. (then) Mother horse saw a big scary hungry tiger and she ran away from her beautiful ponies. The mother horse started limping, Her leg looked sore. The tiger saw the mother horse, but not her children. The scary hungry tiger ran. After mother horse.
Mother horse’s leg was not sore so she kicked the tiger so hard that he couldn’t even get up to catch mother horse. So the mother horse galloped back to her ponies far away.
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